||[Mar. 10th, 2009|09:10 pm]
Oh ho ho! My favorite Naruto badfic was just updated and the newest chapter does not disappoint! I can't believe how perfectly awful it is...I just hope the author doesn't cop out with a forced lovey-dovey ending after all the crap she's thrown into this fic. XDXD
Naruto POV this time. He goes out in search of Sasuke, can't find his chakra clearly thanks to Sakura's devious tactic to throw him off the trail so sends his...er...kage bunshin (is there an English term for this or do they just use the Japanese? I've been reading Japanese fics for the past two weeks and can't remember the English anymore...) to do some searching. He deduces the most likely path and heads in that direction. He catches up to Sasuke, which of course results in sex. Sasuke actually struggles pretty hard, unfortunately without his chakra he's kind of helpless. Naruto then "shows Sasuke who he belongs to."
The author really did want to write sex because she actually was pretty graphic (and nasty). When Sasuke objects to sex in his condition Naruto tells Sasuke to cooperate (shut up and take it) so that it can be over quickly for the baby's sake. Naruto tries to force himself in first, but fails because Sasuke is so tense and tight from fright. He then gets Sasuke to loosen up and get wet with his tongue (after fighting Sasuke a bit more), and then he fucks him hard. In the driving rain.
I appreciated the brutality. It's been a constant in this fic so far.
A wonderfully engaging unrequited love AU has also been updated, to my delight. It does a great job of portraying a completely clueless dork x very self-aware and desperately trying to get over it but mostly failing and angsting emo-boy and their cute (and angsty for one of them) path to love. I really want the next chapter already, this latest chapter ended with much promise for mischief. XD